**lost**

shawn2005 · Post by **shawn2005** » Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:41 am

<center>lost,
as we all are.
he made a fortune,
lived in a mansion.
now he lies in a grave,
next to a beggar's.

</center>

GoddessErika · Post by **GoddessErika** » Fri Jul 22, 2005 8:45 am

Awesome Zero!

Post by **moonflower** » Sat Jul 23, 2005 5:45 pm

<center>lost
behind these eyes
unseen by others
me</center>

Post by **negatvone** » Sun Jul 24, 2005 10:26 pm

moonflower wrote:<center>lost
behind these eyes
unseen by others
me</center>

I really loved this. This is soo true. Brilliant work. I can't even think of a way to reply to that....... yet

Just wait. I'll pull the card out of my pocket. It's in there somewhere.

GoddessErika · Post by **GoddessErika** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 1:14 am

<center>
Lost...
Shortly after "hello"
Stuck treading in the deep blue pools
... Of your eyes</center>

Gillian · Post by **Gillian** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 4:53 am

<center>Lost - (not at sea)
a boy and his mother
last seen wearing
masks
woven from
threads of the past</center>

Topics I've started · Post by **heinzs** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 7:59 am

Damn... these pieces are getting better and better!!!

Definitely need to be published!

Pops

Post by **bags123** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:01 am

Lost,
within the grave
of my own remarks.

Tom Watson · Post by **Tom Watson** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 12:24 pm

Lost behind shut doors,
Rolling on trust's scattered shards,
Untattered Friendship...

shawn2005 · Post by **shawn2005** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 4:56 pm

lost,
stuburn, on an immoral path,
i refuse to give in to my enemies.
buried in my war trench,
now filled of my fallout debris,
i have lost, in a battle to preserve myself
i have lost who i am.

GoddessErika · Post by **GoddessErika** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 7:27 pm

<center>Lost...
In less than a minute
... A lifetime of memories.

Lost...
To untimely tragedy
Swept into a sea of silent good-byes
I will miss you
... My friend.

~Dedicated to Shana Robyn~</center>

Post by **thief of dreams** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 11:21 pm

Post by **moonflower** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 6:31 am

thanks negative!

..yours are all so great!..ive loved them all.. everyones work is just wonderful!..i think Heinzs is right, these need to be published!:mrgreen: ..

<center>lost
battered by words
beaten by Time
a dream</center>

Post by **negatvone** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 7:37 am

<center>
Lost
On this turbulent ride
Souls take flight
To kiss the skies.
</center>

Post by **negatvone** » Tue Jul 26, 2005 7:41 am

<center>Lost in simple thought
A tear glistens forth
For ones that were loved
</center>

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