Haiku #6

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Haiku #6

Post by jeannerené » Fri Oct 22, 2004 8:08 pm

Haiku #6


child who holds this hand
bloom of orchid mine to tend
each are my love



jeanne
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené

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Post by moonflower » Sat Oct 23, 2004 1:09 pm

wow this one is lovely Jeanne!..enjoyed the read :lol: !..
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Post by heinzs » Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:34 pm

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Jean

Post by Debbie » Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:47 am

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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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Post by moonflower » Thu Aug 18, 2005 3:45 pm

still one of my faves of yours Jeanne.. :lol:
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Post by heinzs » Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:14 pm

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Re: Haiku #6

Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 14, 2009 11:52 am

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Re: Haiku #6

Post by wblogan » Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:25 pm

This is a beauty, as are they :grin:
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