SON WORSHIP

[nacona]

Gordy,

You're very welcome! I always say that if the poet still looks at a poem with such a critical eye then the chances are the poem is yet to be finished, that said I will take a better look at this tomorrow and break it down into a more detailed crit for you. I would do it tonight but I am tired, I had a very long day at work. Until then--

Cheers!

Shawn Nacona

[gordy]

[heinzs]

I love the way you can trace the "history" of a piece this way with the chronological order of comments, etc. Does it really feel like you wrote this six years ago? Where did the time in between go?

[gordy]

i know!!! i love that too...... i hate when my posts get pruned and i lose all the old cool comments from people who are no longer here or..... well you know


yes this was my first poem that i posted i think...........

[heinzs]

Well, this forum doesn't prune so it's safe here. I know you understand why other forums need the autoprune on. We'd run out of disc space if not... lol.

[gordy]

oh i understand , i dont have a problem with it, itsusually my fault for not bumping my poems up.........im not as good at catching them now that we dont have a "your topics" button

[heinzs]

In the upper right hand corner of the window is a "user control panel" button. Click on that. The next window will offer you a "show your posts" link. I know, it's not "topics", but it's a place to start.

[snorple]

Beautiful.

[gordy]