SON WORSHIP
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- nacona
- Clearwater Poet
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Gordy,
You're very welcome! I always say that if the poet still looks at a poem with such a critical eye then the chances are the poem is yet to be finished, that said I will take a better look at this tomorrow and break it down into a more detailed crit for you. I would do it tonight but I am tired, I had a very long day at work. Until then--
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
You're very welcome! I always say that if the poet still looks at a poem with such a critical eye then the chances are the poem is yet to be finished, that said I will take a better look at this tomorrow and break it down into a more detailed crit for you. I would do it tonight but I am tired, I had a very long day at work. Until then--
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
"I know how hard it is for you to put food on your family." —Greater Nashua, N.H., Jan. 27, 2000 -George W. Bush
Re: SON WORSHIP
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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Re: SON WORSHIP
I love the way you can trace the "history" of a piece this way with the chronological order of comments, etc. Does it really feel like you wrote this six years ago? Where did the time in between go?
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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i know!!! i love that too...... i hate when my posts get pruned and i lose all the old cool comments from people who are no longer here or..... well you know
yes this was my first poem that i posted i think...........
yes this was my first poem that i posted i think...........
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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Re: SON WORSHIP
Well, this forum doesn't prune so it's safe here. I know you understand why other forums need the autoprune on. We'd run out of disc space if not... lol.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: SON WORSHIP
oh i understand , i dont have a problem with it, itsusually my fault for not bumping my poems up.........im not as good at catching them now that we dont have a "your topics" button
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
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Re: SON WORSHIP
In the upper right hand corner of the window is a "user control panel" button. Click on that. The next window will offer you a "show your posts" link. I know, it's not "topics", but it's a place to start.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: SON WORSHIP
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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