Love Fades
It always seems to be that way
When love is young it's there to stay
Then time moves on and passion fades
Forgotten, lost, perhaps mislaid
On dusty shelves with poems prepared
From different times when life was shared
When love was young it planned to stay
Then time moves on and passion fades
It always seems to be that way
Love's left behind more everyday
Forgotten, lost, love's passion fades
What grows so fast too soon decays
Love Fades
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Love Fades
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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- kuperian4ever
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Re: Love Fades
Damn, it was there and then it wasn't.
I enjoyed reading it, pondering it, and looking up elemental decay rates
Bric-a Brac
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
- heinzs
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Re: Love Fades
Beautiful use of iambic tetrameter
love the rondelle of themed rhymes.. almost like a pantoum
well constructed and executed, good sir.
love the rondelle of themed rhymes.. almost like a pantoum
well constructed and executed, good sir.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Love Fades
Thank you Kup and Heinz for your read and comments. Most appreciated.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
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