Now that's here - Calm and easy

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Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by soular » Fri May 30, 2014 8:57 pm

2nd take 2014 Autumn:
https://soundcloud.com/brain-beach/calm ... ar-ou-2014

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Birds in a cage should all be free
No matter whatever, sing in your tree
Free from all that is, nothing at all
All that flows is all you’ve got, see?

* Round and round, up and down
Let it come and go, dive and soar
Do you only know, possibly

Leave it alone, in infinity

Love that’s true lies in your heart
Let your spirit go, right now
Look up to the sky where stars are sunlit
Feeling, let go and glow

* Round and round, up and down
Let it come and go, dive and soar
Do you only know, possibly

Leave it alone, infinitely
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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by heinzs » Sat May 31, 2014 9:50 pm

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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by soular » Sun Jun 01, 2014 7:27 am

:grin:

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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by heinzs » Tue Jun 03, 2014 10:59 am

letting go to "let it flow" becomes more and more difficult, but it is truly the only way to be lovingly free.
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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by soular » Tue Jun 03, 2014 9:20 pm

Boat in the sea
kept rocking

By the wind/wave
In and out

Thanks :cool:

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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by bags123 » Fri Jun 06, 2014 8:05 am

Now that's a thought. :thumbsup: :cool:
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Re: Now that's here - Calm and easy

Post by soular » Sat Jun 07, 2014 7:51 pm

Right now I'm rough recording the tune - soon to be uploaded to soundcloud.
Thanks :mrgreen:

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