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Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 7:19 am
by bags123
Into Oceans From Streams

At the mouth of a river lies the sum of man's dreams.
Pouring forth raw devotion into oceans from streams.
Meandering currents from some backwater pool
converge in reunion, like old friends from High School
Flowing faster together. Turning notions to dreams.
Pouring forth in its motion into oceans from streams


Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 11:49 am
by heinzs
:cool: :cool:

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 6:31 am
by bags123
Thanks Heinz. Hope you're doing well. At least it's not snowing where you are. :cheers:

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 3:58 pm
by heinzs
It's not snowing, but our water supply is 12% of normal. Hasn't rained in forever. They are going to enforce mandatory water rationing within the next two weeks.

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:27 am
by bags123
Wow, that's terrible. Wish there was a way I could funnel some of the snow melt off out to California. :hello:

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 10:53 am
by heinzs
How about a pipeline for water? What a novel idea! The best part is that if there were a pipeline break it wouldn't pollute the surrounding area and aquafer.

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:00 am
by MJPease
Hello bags, I really like the first verse and I get lost in the second. I think the first verse is very strong all by itself. Oh! and Heinzs my friend are you saying. Our Great Lakes area waterways are Polluted with our abundance of yellow snow. :shrug:

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:46 am
by bags123
Thanks Michael,...I agree,..the second verse pretty much sucked. I deleted it. :cheers:

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 11:45 am
by MJPease
Oh Geez bags! Are you sure. I'm not the sharpest tack in the box when it comes to this stuff. Shouldn't you have waited for some more replies. That's a lot of weight you put on my shoulders :crying: I can't take the pressure. I do like it better this way thou. Now it is way cool triple AAA material "Into Oceans From Streams" is a keeper in my book. Take Care

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 2:09 pm
by bags123
Thanks Michael, I trust your opinion.

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:34 am
by nekot
*chuckle* regarding the pressure Mike felt. :lol:

I just read the poem, so totally missed the 2nd verse.
I like what I read in this was-first stanza.
I think I spend lots of time at the mouth and with notions.

Funny that the comments mention water and pipelines.

That's something about the water in CA Heinz. With all the wet stuff the US is getting, I had no idea that there were any drier-than-supposed-to-be areas. Hoping you get some rain soon.

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 11:25 am
by MJPease
Yah! It's still freaking snowing hear in Buffalo. Heinzs will start a bucket brigade kind of like the Olympic torch. Man o' Man I dig that title "Into Oceans From Streams" Take Care

Re: Into Oceans From Streams

Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 7:53 am
by bags123
:cheers: