More Than I'll Admit
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More Than I'll Admit
More Than I'll Admit
All those years ago, when pleasure spawned our wit
With you alone, and smiling where we'd sit
The white sweater that you wore was double knit
I remember even more than I'll admit
All those years ago, before our love had quit
I remember even more than I'll admit
Not that I would ever wish to recommit
Good memories still survive despite your shit
All those years ago, when pleasure spawned our wit
With you alone, and smiling where we'd sit
The white sweater that you wore was double knit
I remember even more than I'll admit
All those years ago, before our love had quit
I remember even more than I'll admit
Not that I would ever wish to recommit
Good memories still survive despite your shit
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
- kuperian4ever
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
It got me rhyming immediately
Love your poems
Their rhyme, they're meter
I don't see how they could be much sweeter
Ok, that's it.
I'm writing poetry to a guy
O M G
Is that a good critique
or would you like to critique
my critique
Bric-a Brac
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
- heinzs
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
Thanks Kupe,.....your response is unique.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
- kuperian4ever
- Seafoam Poet
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- Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2003 12:01 am
- Tag line: Know it Poet
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
Thanks for your polite come back, bags123, just sayin
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Bric-a Brac
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Re: More Than I'll Admit
I like strange and unusual Kupe. That's why I continue to come here with all you nuts.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
- kuperian4ever
- Seafoam Poet
- Posts: 257
- Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2003 12:01 am
- Tag line: Know it Poet
- Location: Boise, Idaho
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Love those things
Bric-a Brac
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
- MJPease
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
Hello Bags, A pretty whimsical piece from you my friend. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
Re: More Than I'll Admit
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
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