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PreSage

Post by soular » Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:42 pm

There are lots of interpretations.
Most of them are similar.
Authority rules.

A quote that lingers.
And what's within.

There are some original ones.
Some just trying, some eye-opening.
None of them feels right.

A quote that lingers.
And you within.

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Re: PreSage

Post by bags123 » Tue Jun 25, 2013 5:43 pm

I must confess that I both don't understand this, and do at a deeper level. :bow:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: PreSage

Post by soular » Wed Jun 26, 2013 12:21 am

bags123 wrote:I must confess that I both don't understand this, and do at a deeper level.
One of the best comments I've ever got. Thanks much, bags :bow:

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