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Post by bags123 » Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:15 am

Today

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of an eternal round that starts here, now, and then.
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.

It's a fortunate state of events we call life
and despite all its hunger, despair, pain, and strife
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

But I must say the journey's been super thus far
It's been fun while it's lasted, at times quite bizarre
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around

Today,...the beginning, or it may be the end
of something once started, that was left yet again
Depending on what it might be that you've found
One can stay where they're going, or turn back around.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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