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The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Mon Oct 22, 2012 12:30 pm

The Unresolved

I've wondered since I was a lad
So many questions I have had
But through the years most answers came
The unresolved were what remained

I've found these harder to ignore
Increasingly my need for more
Each time I think they've gone for good
they come back like I knew they would

Those same old things I'll never know
No matter how old I may grow
My list of questions over time
Still unresolved Remaining mine
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:27 pm

And ever growing...

I suspect the resolution will come in the passage from this plane to the next, or there will be no resolution at all.

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Re: The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:56 am

Hi Heinz,
I certainly hope that at some point,...all will be revealed. Otherwise it'll be like the end of an Alfred Hitchcock movie. Never quite sure for eternity. I'd hate that. :computer:
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by negatvone » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:48 pm

Gerry. you need more. This is a query within a mind. Build on this. Reminds me of Doyle in the beginning.
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Thu Nov 08, 2012 6:28 am

Hi Jim,...who the "F" is Doyle? As in Arthur Conan?? Not sure I understand your comment,...but that's OK. I find I'm not sure of anything anymore. :mrgreen:
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by soular » Thu Sep 07, 2017 2:56 pm

After rewriting a piece into "Eclipsing to light", I searched through and found this. Some kind of coincidence, maybe, or there's no such since everything is meant to be. I am not sure either and wonder if there's anyone who can possibly be, to be totally shamelessly honest . Better with something to explore than nothing, I think.

Thanks much. :hello:

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Re: The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Tue Oct 10, 2017 6:16 am

I think I'm capable of being totally honest. Trouble is,...I rarely am. :hello:
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by soular » Tue Oct 10, 2017 7:31 am

What an honest confession! :mrgreen:

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