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Post by burdick » Thu May 10, 2012 3:53 am

Fear is ancient wisdom, past its’ prime.
Anger arms us with foolish courage,
While love gives strength the Other to find
And hate creates a black hole of death.

Reason seeks what philosophers call truth
And logic acts as her handmaiden.
Freedom sets the questing being loose.
Existence expands explosively.

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