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Post by burdick » Tue May 01, 2012 3:25 am

Allusion leads to confused wisdom and delusion,
leaves the mind confined blind in life intertwined.
Brushing aside the world of illusion,
The dark corridor is left behind

standing there at the open door
Freedom demands lost of self.
Let binding thoughts release.
Now, center yourself.

Meditate in peace.
Seek the numbing,
Blinding white


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