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Post by burdick » Sat Apr 28, 2012 3:39 am

Watching who comes when winter starts to wane,
I was pleased to see wife’s’ sister arrive.
We read books warmed by our glowing fireplace.
Worries fled, silence reined, the books alive.

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Re: Visit

Post by bags123 » Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:10 am

You seem to be on a poetic roll my friend. Another gem.
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