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Return to #10 Sumer Sokok

Post by burdick » Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:47 am

Ankara has exploded across the barren hills.
Growing younger, noisier, flushed in growth.
“New Town” is no longer a novice,
Whispers of street vendors, a shadowy memory,
Replaced by young Turks, tourists, and accretion.
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Post by bags123 » Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:56 am

All things must pass. Interesting verbal portrait. :cheers:
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