Ode to confusion

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Ode to confusion

Post by burdick » Mon Apr 16, 2012 3:20 am

Hail to thee,
oh, serene co-dependent,
even though you be
very field-independent!

Is it healthy
To give your help,
or is it stealthy
masochism felt?

How do you know
,within your state,
which way to go
to seek your fate?

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