Potala

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burdick
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Potala

Post by burdick » Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:06 am

Red atop of white,
A giant to the city
But puny under the
Snow capped mountains,
The palace waits in vain for
Its’ owner to return.

It is cold in April.
The lilacs bravely bloom.
Birds court and build nests
Snow remains low
On the mountains with the Yaks,
And the peaks are bright
Against the blue clear sky.

Tibet’s rebirth into China
Has been painful and unsought,
Leaving a wound that
Only the rebirth of
The awaited 15th
Will heal.

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Re: Potala

Post by bags123 » Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:50 am

"You say Potala, and I say Potato". Potala, Potato, Potato, Potala,....lets call the whole thing off". Couldn't help myself. sorry. :hello:
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