Farmer village

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Farmer village

Post by burdick » Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:16 am

Persimmon trees, and onions grow
Outside the red-tiled roofs.
Words are strong barriers
But welcome and cheer overcome.
Spice scented hearts
Around our necks;
We await breakfast
And a country day.

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Re: Farmer village

Post by heinzs » Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:46 pm

Nice vignette. Cheers!

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Re: Farmer village

Post by burdick » Fri Apr 06, 2012 1:45 pm

I believe this was one of those events that the Han staged for us. the village even had a resident artist. Impressive, never the less.

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