Gift to my dulcinea

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jkalwaye
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Gift to my dulcinea

Post by jkalwaye » Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:36 am

I wandered everywhere in my town
Where I am seeking a gift for my Dulcinea
That is a symbol of my love on her.

After a while I realized my foolishness
That I can’t give nothing her more than
My love, which is the wealthiest gift
That one can give ever.



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Re: Gift to my dulcinea

Post by heinzs » Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:01 pm

But for some love does not seem to be enough... Cherish your Dulcinea.
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Re: Gift to my dulcinea

Post by heinzs » Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:22 pm

Please explain why it's "not a poem". Thanks.

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Re: Gift to my dulcinea

Post by Jadynara » Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:59 pm

wow i didnt know that there were specific rules on what makes something a poem and what doesn't.....
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