YOU ARE MY BELOVED

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jkalwaye
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YOU ARE MY BELOVED

Post by jkalwaye » Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:18 am

You; you are my beloved
You; you are my beloved
I can’t suffer your absence
Even a second in my life
You; you are my beloved
Can you remember our
Our first meeting
Still I remember it alive in my heart
Do you; DO you; do remember it
Is it on our school days?
Is it on our college days?
You; you are my beloved
I don’t know when do
I fall in love with you
I am very shy to express
My love on you, but
You; you are my beloved.

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Re: YOU ARE MY BELOVED

Post by Jadynara » Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:23 am

I find this piece difficult to read. I cant locate a rhythm... maybe with snaps and read aloud. I just cant get it to flow smoothly. I am going to read through it a few more times.
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011

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Re: YOU ARE MY BELOVED

Post by Jadynara » Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:29 am

i really like the message your sending in this and i am wondering if these are perhaps lyrics rather than a poem....
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011

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