"It hurts when you push that hard" or "That's going to leave a mark"
Sinking down deep
in attitude and mood
Too much effort even to be lethargic
beginning to mope and brood
Waterless waves drowning positivity
Clawing for light
choking on black empathy
Drinking in poison night
Floating in loathing
Loathing the feeling
Pushing back only
causes more reeling
Stuck in the recesses
of past failures and present pain
Regressing and reflecting as
the dirges chorus repeats it's moldy refrain
Craggy mountain peaks
seem not worth the climb
They only blot out the sun
eclipsing all better times
Previously achieved escape
seem fake, out of reach
Hope, joy and sunshine
Mysteries or myths cloaked in mystique
The heavy handed thumb
and weighty pressing oppression
has pushed down once again
Imprinting his mark, a deep dark depression
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title undetermined
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: title undetermined
this is pretty new and raw and i have a couple of ideas for a title, any thoughts or suggestions are welcome
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
Re: title undetermined
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Re: title undetermined
After a year in limbo is it really still that raw? Wow...
I actually like it like it is...
I actually like it like it is...
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: title undetermined
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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