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The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Fri Nov 13, 2009 6:30 am

The Unresolved

I've wondered since I was a lad
So many questons I once had,
but through the years most answers came
The unresolved were what remained

I've found them harder to ignore
Increasingly, since I was four
Each time I think they're gone for good
they come back like I knew they would

Perhaps some things I'll never know
No matter how old I may grow
The answers changing over time
form questions that were never mine
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Re: The Unresolved

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:22 pm

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Re: The Unresolved

Post by bags123 » Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:30 pm

:thewave: :cheers:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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