There be no place where we have gone
No rocks beneath our feet
Nor wicked sun to burn us dry
As we lie cooling by the stream.
A spring-like morning, in many aspects
Will give us what we need
Compare us to this morning light
So that you'll begin to dream.
I sketched his face with my soft hands
And stumbled over words
His heart began to melt with time
As bitterness occurred.
Slowly moving through the steps
I echoed what was best
But couldn't convince my love of this
That I just need some rest.
I Just Need Some Rest
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I Just Need Some Rest
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Re: I Just Need Some Rest
I love the tone and feel, but am confused as to where I've been once finished reading it. Second time through didn't add any "gotchas". I'd type this as "abstract". As I said, I like it.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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