And Should I Dream?

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DeirdreScott
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And Should I Dream?

Post by DeirdreScott » Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:28 am

And should I dream, if dreaming leads to waking?
And waking leads to longing, and longing leading me?
And should I wander, if wandering brings me you
And in such an one I experience the pure and true?

Or should I sleep, for just a little while more?
And in that sleep, dream the dreams of fancy?
Or should I wake, if only for the taste of that which guides me through?
For the taste of that dream brings with it the want of belonging to you.

~ Need some help. Don't know where to go next...
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roll these misty windows down
to catch my breath again
and then go and go and go just drive me
home then back again
here I lay just like always
don't let me
go take me to the edge

-Deftones

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Re: And Should I Dream?

Post by heinzs » Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:53 pm

tough one, Deidre. Have to think on it.

You've been gone a long while...

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Re: And Should I Dream?

Post by DeirdreScott » Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:46 pm

Aye, I have.
I have been without inspiration these long months, but am again struck by the Muse.

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~~~~@ Deirdre Scott Hamilton @~~~~

roll these misty windows down
to catch my breath again
and then go and go and go just drive me
home then back again
here I lay just like always
don't let me
go take me to the edge

-Deftones

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Re: And Should I Dream?

Post by heinzs » Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:19 pm

That fickle muse... lol.
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