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Post by snorple » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:36 am

Boudicca
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Post by heinzs » Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:36 pm

Thanks for reposting this. I think the original got lost somewhere in time.
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Re: Boudicca

Post by snorple » Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:46 am

I tried to make a pantoum
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Post by heinzs » Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:11 pm

The pantoum is a difficult form to master. I think you've actually done a great job with this one. We are our own worst critics most times.

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Re: Boudicca

Post by Tony Fiona » Wed Jan 28, 2009 4:39 pm

magnificent
Boudicca rides
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A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Re: Boudicca

Post by snorple » Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:40 am

Hehe, you spoil me Tony Fiona, but I like it.

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