I like the piece and it's very descriptive of hummingbird flight so my title would be "Hummingbird Flight".
Here is something I found about this amazing creature:
Hummingbirds are the only birds that can fly backwards and upside down. During mating season, male hummingbirds fly backwards, then forwards to attract a mate. Hummingbirds can fly horizontally, do barrel rolls, and even hover in mid-air.
Hummingbirds flap their wings over 10 times a second, and their heart beats over 1 000 times a minute. Normally, they have to eat their whole weight in food each day to maintain enough energy to last. Their wings are very strong, and the wing muscles account for about 25-30 per-cent of their body weight.
To hover, their wings paddle horizontally, making a cycle in both directions, in a figure-eight movement. In doing this, the wings pivot, making the feathers descend, pushing air in either direction. To fly forward, the wings paddle vertically.
Because of their size, hummingbirds have a flight technique more like insects then birds. Their bodies aren't horizontal, but up-right. This means the wings can't move up and down, like other birds, but sweep backwards and forwards, pushing air up instead of down. The wings pivot exactly 90 degrees every time they change direction. This allows air to get pushed up no matter what direction the wings move. Hummingbird wings are like the horizontal rotor of a helicopter.
that was a generous and kind compliment... big hug from this writer. I'm happy you read this poem and responded with your thoughts. 
