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Re: Heading North

Post by bags123 » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:37 am

Thanks Jady. Hope you're feeling better soon. :hello:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: Heading North

Post by bags123 » Thu Jan 06, 2011 9:12 am

So,... I changed the last couplet to something I like better just now. Funny,...how when you read an older piece you've written,...you always (usually) want to change something, somewhere. That's what history will do for you. Gives you a different perspective based on your age. The older you get, the more you just don't give a flying ---k about most things. Unless they're the important things. Those you try to give much more time. If you can. :cheers:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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