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Energy

Post by soular » Mon Sep 11, 2017 4:37 pm

What makes you feel not alone
and what makes you feel you are
deep inside

What makes you dive and soar,
moves you here and there,
keeping you going, together

Through inexplicable encounters
and with clues kept unknown
you step into a realm, familiar yet new

I search for words, and love is the only
Maybe too shallow but too deep and vast
once you're in

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Re: Energy

Post by heinzs » Tue Sep 12, 2017 12:11 am

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Re: Energy

Post by soular » Tue Sep 12, 2017 2:44 pm

:hello:

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