In The Year Ninety Nine

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Altawell
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In The Year Ninety Nine

Post by Altawell » Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:19 pm

In The Year Ninety Nine




Rusty machine
Rusty barrel
Rusty fan
Tell a story
In an old
House
In an old
Barn
Where your
Past
Active role
Gave something
To this world!


Oh…
The question
Is …..!
Where were you
In the year
Ninety nine?
Where were you
On seventeen
Of July?
Where were you
At exactly
Ten to nine?


The super dog
The super horse
The super rhyme
Found
A place...
… Somewhere
Everyone claimed ….
‘That is mine’!
Oh…
The question
Is….!
How do you travel
Now and then
Our earthly time?





Altawell





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Re: In The Year Ninety Nine

Post by moonflower » Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:51 pm

interesting piece..i find myself pondering the words..enjoyed! :thumbsup:
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Re: In The Year Ninety Nine

Post by Altawell » Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:11 am

moonflower wrote:interesting piece..i find myself pondering the words..enjoyed! :thumbsup:

Hi moonflower,
Thank you for writing and for your comments. Glad to know that you have enjoyed reading the poem :hello:
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Re: In The Year Ninety Nine

Post by BeeJay » Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:03 pm

In Time.----- :hello: BeeJay
If the Universe was a little smaller , I may just be able to reach out to you. Copyright © 2009 Baru Gobira
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Re: In The Year Ninety Nine

Post by Altawell » Wed May 12, 2010 4:23 pm

BeeJay wrote:In Time.----- :hello: BeeJay

Yes, 'In Time'... :cheers:
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