Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

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Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

Post by negatvone » Wed Jun 08, 2005 6:31 pm

I thought you should know I love the way you pass
Just to hold you high and shelter your pain
Looking at the pictures of your youth and the limitless class
The endless memories cloud my mind like downpours of rain

My heart stops every time I gander at what you left me. The token
Tokens of love at first sight balance my mind on an instant
Even though you are so close, my heart is still broken
I just hope you deem my simple words to have subsistence

I never wished for anything more than you to find light
In every instance without giving up this simple fight
The fight was my own to duel within myself for you
Notice I have never stopped this unending duel and stayed true

I don’t feel right when you have gone away
Not for a moment and not on this day
In my mind, we still go out for hours and play

Fields of green grass with us pummeling each other
Thoughts of you and your younger brother
My two children holding my hands covered in love
You two are truly my only gifts from above

Just remember how much daddy loves you till the day that I die
When this happens, I hope you never start to cry

Remember, love is eternal. I’ll always be there
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Post by starfire » Wed Jun 08, 2005 7:58 pm

God Neg, you have me in tears.

Wow, I really love this, this is so great. I'm sure you are an ausome father to love your children this much.

:bow:

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Post by heinzs » Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:17 pm

You're a gread dad Jim...

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Post by Tom Watson » Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:58 pm

Wonderful tribute Jim. Always be the person you wish them to be, and by your example, they will...
Stay strong and healthy for them...

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Post by Eternum 1 » Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:05 pm

Beautiful write and sentiment for this approaching Fathers Day.

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Negatvone...

Post by Debbie » Sun Jun 12, 2005 2:42 pm

This is one heart felt poem and a legacy for your sweet children....
as long as they know you love them Negatvone..it will pass all tests of time...they have a very loving and caring Daddy.. :bow:
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Re: Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

Post by starfire » Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:59 pm

I can't believe I read this three years ago...
I didn't want it to get lost.
It has always been so beautiful...

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Re: Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

Post by heinzs » Mon Jan 05, 2009 11:33 pm

Thanks for bumping it up.

Haven't seen or heard from Jim in some time. He doesn't answer his email either. :-(
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Re: Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

Post by starfire » Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:47 am

really?

Wherever he is, I hope he is okay..

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Re: Just A Word From Daddy(To My Precious Children)

Post by negatvone » Sun Mar 15, 2009 10:01 pm

I'm still around. :mrgreen: Trust me; I'm too stubborn to go anywhere.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-

If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.

Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06

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