**Grandpas Song** Forum Award: May 21, 2005

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Eternum 1
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**Grandpas Song** Forum Award: May 21, 2005

Post by Eternum 1 » Sun May 01, 2005 5:32 pm

Winner: New Members' Cafe Award: May 21, 2005
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If I was real tiny
I'd rope a bumble bee
Nestled in its soft fur
ride over the flowery sea

If I was gigantic
I'd hold my arms up high
and catch the other planets
as they went flying by

I guess when God made me
he thought of other charms
It seems I'm made just right
to hold you in my arms

at this point Chloe giggles and says your funny granpa
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Post by erik_satie_rollerblading » Sun May 01, 2005 8:03 pm

great use of scale and imagery :grin:

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Post by Dreamspeaker36 » Mon May 02, 2005 6:06 am

:thewave:
Bravo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Many Blessings
Dreamspeaker36

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Post by SUFFU » Mon May 02, 2005 12:57 pm

:bump:
<center> ******
I am badly bruised,
yet there is no blood,
I screamed in agony
... and no one heard
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~*-SUFFU-*~ </center>

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Post by Friend_forever » Wed May 04, 2005 7:09 am

Awesome ET... I am impressed with this write...

Nice!!!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara

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Post by Eternum 1 » Wed May 04, 2005 11:44 am

Thank you Erik, always appreciate your comments. :cool:

XQ: A sweet for those with a sweet tooth :lol:

Dreamspeaker; Which one of the huzzahs are you? I'm thinking the pink one second from the left :?: Thanks!


Suffu; Thanks for the bump. And it's not even my birthday :mrgreen:

Friend Forever: Toujours a plaiser mon ami toujours :cool:

Pax vobiscum,

ET
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Dyers Eve

Post by Dyers Eve » Wed May 04, 2005 1:53 pm

thats awesome. i got so many images of my fallen grandfather.... thanks for sharing. :thumbsup:

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Post by Debbie » Wed May 04, 2005 6:07 pm

I could hear this poem sung to the little one..
So beautiful it is..
and I could hear the giggles also..
thanks for sharing
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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Post by nirvana » Wed May 04, 2005 10:31 pm

Great Poem!

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Post by Eternum 1 » Thu May 05, 2005 9:41 am

Thanks DyersE, I appreciate the shared reminisce. I miss my grandfather who taught me self reliance and the importance of working with my hands as well as my mind.


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Post by Eternum 1 » Thu May 05, 2005 9:47 am

Hey Debbie:

She does love to laugh the lil imp and rides a horse like she was born to it. I'm truly blessed with such an audience.

regards.
Dennis


Hey Nirvana:

Thanks for the comment,

with Meta,

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Dyers Eve

Post by Dyers Eve » Thu May 05, 2005 1:57 pm

my grandfather taught me so much it kind of scares me... im really glad this was shared. than you again...

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Post by Eternum 1 » Fri May 13, 2005 10:14 pm

:cheers:
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Post by Eternum 1 » Sat Mar 25, 2006 11:48 pm

:bump:
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Post by Debbie » Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:53 am

This one brought me a smile again ET....made me think of my little ones.....I miss them so much... :bow:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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