<center>~Lost in your flames~
When I read your name
“Forever flame”
I feel warm
Your encouraging words
Strike me like a storm
Your smart writings
Hit me like lightning
Whatever you say
Comes gently my way
Whenever I read your replies
I feel that your heart truly implies
What a great person you are
Whether you’re near or far
Your flames shine my soul
Your heat melts my wall
Your light is all I see
And your love is always free
Your kindness’s shown with your candle
Oh! Your inspirational poetry I can’t handle
What I feel when I read your art
My heart feels like it’s about to part
No matter what I write
I won’t be able to fight
The fact that I’m lost in your warm flames
And that’s where I’ll end up with no room left for blames
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This poem is for ForverFlame .. my great freind who was always supportive , I actually was going to post it in the August challenge but instead I posted Tom's (Always the Doctor) ...so here it is ...I hope u like it Carlos and the rest of my dear poetry freinds..
Let me know what u think!!
~~Lost In Your Flames~~ [For ForeverFlame]
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- Candy_Cane
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Dear, dear Cane........... I am at a loss of words...... No one has ever done something like this for me before! I am smiling as I write this . You really have an open spirit, Cane. So free and open with your feelings. It's as if you never hesitate with what you feel. I really appreciate this, D. You were the first friend I made here at the poetry pages, and ultimately the best. I've always enjoyed our conversations, your replies, your poetry...mainly just your company. I really don't know what to say. I come from a very rigid family that doesn't know too much about emotions. They were never very open. Like I said before, they don't even know I write poetry. They wouldn't care, anyway. So I find it hard to relate to some, I kinda keep distant. But you've always had heartfelt things to say about my writings...keeping my spirits up to write more. It is a blessing to be appreciated like this in such a special way. Thank you, my very dear friend Candy_Cane. May you never lose your shine, your charm, because it is what makes you so beautiful.
- Candy_Cane
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Now I'm speechless Carlos .. I don;t know what to say after all what u said.. it's the sweetest thing ever.. no one has ever said that to me ..thank u so much on behalf of my happy heart and my shaking soul for writing this ... and yes u mean so much to me.. u're my best virtual freind ever.. and may u never lose ur sweetness cuz this is what makes u the best.
Stay cool
Dina
Stay cool
Dina
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- Candy_Cane
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