My Relationships (I'm The Dog)

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My Relationships (I'm The Dog)

Post by SamIAm » Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:41 pm

I tossed the stick once again
My dog Spot ran and fetched it
He brought it back
And to my surprise
He said, “This is a bunch of bullshit!
Everyday, Master, you toss that stick
And I fetch it without reason
Then you do it again
Day after day
And season after season.
You throw
I fetch
You toss
I fetch
Whether near or whether far.
It doesn’t matter what it lands in:
In grass, in shit
Or under the car.
Well, it stops right here
Oh, Master Dear
This fetching I won't do
Because I have to wonder
Who loves this most?
Is it me -
Or is it you?"
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Re: My Relationships (I'm The Dog)

Post by heinzs » Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:16 pm

LOL... good question. In my case it's the dog's idea, but I know this is just a metaphor.
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Re: My Relationships (I'm The Dog)

Post by bags123 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 5:11 am

I think that's why I like cats better than dogs. Dogs are so much like us. :cheers:
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Re: My Relationships (I'm The Dog)

Post by nekot » Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:35 am

Love it.

The rhyme. The rhythm. The images.

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