Relaxing Naked I Conclude
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Relaxing Naked I Conclude
Relaxing Naked I Conclude.
I'm rarely in a better mood
Some things I say, are heard as rude,
but better said than only thought
before I'm dead, and alls for naught
I write this verse while in the nude
Relaxing naked I conclude;
When bare necessities are sought
one can't rely on what he's bought
I'm rarely in a better mood
Some things I say, are heard as rude,
but better said than only thought
before I'm dead, and alls for naught
I write this verse while in the nude
Relaxing naked I conclude;
When bare necessities are sought
one can't rely on what he's bought
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude
Hello Bags, Very revealing my friend. One should choose his or her purchase's wisely. One might not be able to live on apparel. But how about a fine Belguim Browning rifle or a nice set of fishing tackle or bow and arrow. No Diamonds fancy coins or (krugerans?) All we need is a loin cloth and some well thought out tools. We either learn to use tools or become tools, and you can qoute me on that. Have a Happy Thanksgiving Gerry.
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Are you naked bags? Never mind I don't want to know. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02
Sincerely
Michael J Pease
Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude
MJPease wrote:Are you naked bags? Never mind I don't want to know. Take Care
It's kind of chilly today Mike,...so I've opted to stay fully clothed.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Hi. I like it a lot. Thinking why a while, I can only simply conclude I like it a lot. Cheers.
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the bare essentials are all we need in the long run
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Sorry for the late reply. Thanks all.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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upon reading your poem, i really like your rhyme and rhythm.........i think i'm good at that too so i recognize
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
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A poor workman quarrels with his tools and the pun is intended Liked the poem.___BeeJay
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And so it came to pass
that everything that was
had never come to be
it's a dangerous living this... life...
Did you think that the demon would possess us?
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one should dress to suit the occasion. nakedness is perfect for sharing (thought)
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Thanks all.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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