Relaxing Naked I Conclude

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bags123
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:29 pm

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I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by Moushka » Mon Sep 10, 2012 12:22 am

Upon reading your poem again from 'view your posts', a working girl could get a lot of insight out of it's conclusion. I have been known to barter for basic necessities. Darn now i can't remember the last line, but anyway, that was what came to mind.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action

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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Fri Sep 14, 2012 6:56 am

Thanks Moushka
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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