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Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Wed Oct 21, 2009 12:27 pm

Relaxing Naked I Conclude.

I'm rarely in a better mood
Some things I say, are heard as rude,
but better said than only thought
before I'm dead, and alls for naught

I write this verse while in the nude
Relaxing naked I conclude;
When bare necessities are sought
one can't rely on what he's bought
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by MJPease » Sat Nov 21, 2009 7:56 am

Hello Bags, Very revealing my friend. One should choose his or her purchase's wisely. One might not be able to live on apparel. But how about a fine Belguim Browning rifle or a nice set of fishing tackle or bow and arrow. No Diamonds fancy coins or (krugerans?) All we need is a loin cloth and some well thought out tools. We either learn to use tools or become tools, and you can qoute me on that. Have a Happy Thanksgiving Gerry.
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02

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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:03 am

:cheers:
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by MJPease » Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:46 am

Are you naked bags? :shock: Never mind I don't want to know. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02

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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:26 am

MJPease wrote:Are you naked bags? :shock: Never mind I don't want to know. Take Care

It's kind of chilly today Mike,...so I've opted to stay fully clothed. :thumbsup:
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Post by moonflower » Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:02 am

:thumbsup:
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by soular » Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:06 pm

Hi. I like it a lot. Thinking why a while, I can only simply conclude I like it a lot. Cheers. :grin:

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Post by poeticpiers » Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:40 am

the bare essentials are all we need in the long run
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Post by bags123 » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:45 pm

Sorry for the late reply. Thanks all. :hello:
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by Moushka » Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:29 am

upon reading your poem, i really like your rhyme and rhythm.........i think i'm good at that too so i recognize
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
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Post by BeeJay » Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:18 am

A poor workman quarrels with his tools and the pun is intended :lol: Liked the poem.___BeeJay
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by despicability » Tue Jan 26, 2010 5:11 pm

:cool:
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And so it came to pass
that everything that was
had never come to be


it's a dangerous living this... life...

Did you think that the demon would possess us?

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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by poeticpiers » Thu Mar 18, 2010 3:22 pm

one should dress to suit the occasion. nakedness is perfect for sharing (thought)
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by bags123 » Mon Aug 23, 2010 11:53 am

Thanks all. :hello:
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Re: Relaxing Naked I Conclude

Post by Crazy World » Tue Aug 24, 2010 4:57 am

:lol:

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