Oh it’s not much.

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Oh it’s not much.

Post by pb72 » Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:23 am

Doctor it hurts so down there

They’re hanging down, you know where

No I don’t want to show you

Just gimme some of that goo



Yes there’s blood when I go

I want it stopped, make it so

It’s nothing sinister is it?

Cos it’s only red stuff mixed with my shit?




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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by moonflower » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:33 am

:lol: scary images, but it made me smile!.. :thumbsup:
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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by heinzs » Wed Mar 04, 2009 6:18 pm

Too bad it isn't funny... I don't think people will ever learn.
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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by moonflower » Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:05 pm

:cry: now i feel really bad because my response was so light-hearted...and of course if this is about a true incident, then i wholeheartedly agree with heinzs that it certainly is NOT funny..i was assuming that it was meant to be amusing since it was posted in the Funny forum..i truly do apologise and i hope that there are no hard feelings.. :darn:
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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by pb72 » Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:37 am

Hi thanks for your responses

I wrote it because of the blase responses some people have to their health, it was a light hearted reminder to always take these problems seriously and I find peoples responses almost comical at times. So I think you're both right to say this isn't but is funny.

It was also an attempt to write a poem on the most ridiculous subject - haemorrhoids.

I have written a few 'Disease' poems which range from Parkinsons and anorexia nervosa to colds and the above.

I'll post some more soon.

Mark

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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by heinzs » Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:51 am

The way it was written it could just as easily have referred to colon cancer, ergo the response.
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Re: Oh it’s not much.

Post by pb72 » Sat Mar 07, 2009 1:52 pm

Exactly my point Heinz, people want a quick fix and don't listen to what we should be doing. Even if it is a minor problem you need to make sure it is minor.

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