Favor
I know you are frightened or saddened or freaked.
It's there in your words, your despair so unique.
He seems like an asshole I'll gladly admit.
Such wasted potential. Why won't he commit?
The blackness you feel is making you blue.
I know you're obsessed, he's unemployed too.
But please just stop writing, such lurid details.
I get it, you're heartsick. The end of the tale.
Please join a committee that helps other folk.
Help lighten their burden, and loosen their yoke.
Then write a long sonnet of all this good work,
and soon you won't even remember the jerk.
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Re: A Favor
A recipe for a remedy against quite a number of blues.
Thanks!
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Re: A Favor
Great advice. Perfect meter. Bravo!!
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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