in this disconnect a rediscovering of what is lost
the prescence of your absence
the fading of anger resentment confusion
a mellow sun filtering through the dark
its in the way you dont care anymore
the silence you give speaking volumes dulled expression
the subtle behavior, ashes, no longer on fire
lack of interest, jaded of passion
creating a gentle strength a truth
redirected to the reasons for the beginning
in the solitude thought is clear
in the loneliness a better company found
ignorant painful bliss
nonetheless a strength relvealing itself
in a new humble fashion
a new fight but no need of swinging
what waits beyond surely golden
stronger and humbled
Humble Strength
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- nrip4life
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Re: Humble Strength
This is beautifully heartbreaking. Probably not the words You want to hear, but it's what hit my soul as I read.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
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Re: Humble Strength
this speaks volumes to me, very well wrote and i really enjoyed the way you captured the emotions
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
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Re: Humble Strength
glad you enjoyed and related to cameltoe
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