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Jade
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Angelic

Post by Jade » Mon Dec 03, 2012 8:11 am

Angelic
I wanted to be your superhero.
I wanted to be your sun.
I wanted to be your laughter,
Your teardrops, your dreams, your fun.
I wanted to be the comb
That would brush your beautiful hair
As you sat glistening in the moonlight;
So angelic as I pictured you there.
I wanted so much to tell you
You are the star that lights the dark.
But for fear of failure I kept it hidden -
The honest love felt within my heart.
I must have hid it well
But I should have never tried.
Because somewhere in my search for courage
Your love for me was pushed aside.
Now I want to hold you
And be what you need me to be.
I just pray He sends down an angel
To somehow lead you back to me.
Last edited by Jade on Sat Jun 04, 2016 10:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: *********

Post by CamelToe » Sun Dec 09, 2012 1:55 pm

I really like the flow of this, The rhyming is excellent through out. Well penned! :thumbsup:

The first few lines for me were amazing
Jade wrote:I wanted to be your superhero
I wanted to be your sun
I wanted to be your laughter
Your teardrops, your dreams, your fun
:bow: I can only hope to write lines that are so simple but express so much
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before

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Re: *********

Post by Jade » Sun Dec 09, 2012 7:46 pm

thanks Jeremiah. Means a lot to me. :hugs:
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**

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Re: *********

Post by Jade » Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:42 pm

I'm trying to put my poetry together. Can someone help me out with a title for this? I'm lost. My dad said he would title it Angelic. What do you guys think?
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
click here to view **MY ARCHIVE**

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Re: Angelic

Post by heinzs » Sun Jul 10, 2016 9:58 pm

I think Angelic is a fitting title. It is appropriate and alluring.
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