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Travis
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Post by Travis » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:36 pm

A softly spoken smile
Sparkles serenely
From windows
To your soul
Garnishing glowing gentleness
On this life
Tenderly touched
By a single glance
Of crisp, cloudless
Breezy blue skies
And for whatever the cost
i find i’m lost
In this enchanting expression
In Your eyes…

June 1990

©~Travis
Last edited by Travis on Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:53 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Lisa

Post by frozentears » Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:09 am

beautiful! :bow:
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Re: Lisa

Post by Travis » Mon Jul 16, 2012 10:24 am

Thanks! Believe it or not, I wrote this for my beautiful wife when we first started dating...over 22 years ago... :hearts:
Appreciate your comments...

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Re: Lisa

Post by heinzs » Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:48 pm

Put the date you wrote it at the end and remove the double spacing... it detracts from the reading. I love it!

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Re: Lisa

Post by Travis » Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:56 am

Thanks for your comments, Pops! They have been duly noted!! :thumbsup:

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Re: Lisa

Post by heinzs » Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:09 pm

It really looks much better this way.

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Re: Lisa

Post by Travis » Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:09 pm

:thumbsup:
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