Love at first sight.
He looks, She looks. When their eyes met.
The subtle chemistry began
That binds a woman and a man.
You can be sure they won’t forget.
That evening twenty years ago
When they met by happenstance.
Which was the start of true romance.
A love which continues to grow.
Twenty years of happiness
In which they’ve raised a family
I’m sure their children would agree.
The secret is togetherness.
They have no reason to regret
That summer night , when they first met.
Friday, 06 January 2012
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Love at first sight.
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Re: Love at first sight.
Very nice. Good wordplay, and not too wordy.
"Sight at first love
hand in hand
like hand in glove
thank my luck
and the stars above."
"Sight at first love
hand in hand
like hand in glove
thank my luck
and the stars above."
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Re: Love at first sight.
I thought I was too old to believe in love at first. Which shows how wrong you can be
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Re: Love at first sight.
Never too old, Ivor...
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Very nice read. Thanks.
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Re: Love at first sight.
Subtle :-)
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words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Re: Love at first sight.
I enjoyed reading. Thanks muchpoeticpiers reborn wrote:Love at first sight.
He looks
She looks
When their eyes met
The subtle chemistry began
When they met by happenstance
Which was the start of true romance
A love which continues to grow
That summer night
Friday, 06 January 2012
http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers
Nothing is here without love.
https://soundcloud.com/brain-beach
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