Love at first sight.

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poeticpiers reborn
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Love at first sight.

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:06 pm

Love at first sight.

He looks, She looks. When their eyes met.
The subtle chemistry began
That binds a woman and a man.
You can be sure they won’t forget.
That evening twenty years ago
When they met by happenstance.
Which was the start of true romance.
A love which continues to grow.
Twenty years of happiness
In which they’ve raised a family
I’m sure their children would agree.
The secret is togetherness.
They have no reason to regret
That summer night , when they first met.

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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by audiofool » Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:03 pm

Very nice. Good wordplay, and not too wordy. :thumbsup:

"Sight at first love
hand in hand
like hand in glove
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and the stars above."

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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:55 am

I thought I was too old to believe in love at first. Which shows how wrong you can be

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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by heinzs » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:24 pm

Never too old, Ivor... :grin:
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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by soular » Thu Jan 12, 2012 6:19 am

Very nice read. Thanks. :grin:

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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by Jade » Mon Dec 03, 2012 3:34 am

Subtle :-)
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Re: Love at first sight.

Post by soular » Fri Dec 21, 2012 8:12 pm

poeticpiers reborn wrote:Love at first sight.

He looks
She looks
When their eyes met
The subtle chemistry began

When they met by happenstance
Which was the start of true romance
A love which continues to grow
That summer night

Friday, 06 January 2012
http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers
I enjoyed reading. Thanks much :grin:

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