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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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sean1234
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and..............

Post by sean1234 » Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:34 pm

and..........nothing lasts forever
and.........we all grow old
and........there is no justice
and......the truth is elusive
and......we are born to die
and......tomorrow never comes
and.......freedom is an illusion
and........I love you
and........nothing else matters.Sean

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soular
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Re: and..............

Post by soular » Mon Oct 10, 2011 9:36 am

This sounds like lyrics. The last 2 lines are hook. Can be a great song. Thanks.

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Re: and..............

Post by moonflower » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:24 am

i love this!..cant believe it got such few responses!..its absolutely captivating and i agree with soular..the last 2 lines says it all..a super great poem! :thumbsup: :hello:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: and..............

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:51 pm

Love is the force that powers the universe.
Without love life is perverse.
There are no ands or ifs or buts
There's only love quite simply put.

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