Sonnet? Pt 1?

[VivaldiFall]

Shall I confess my heart to her tonight?
No, for I shall not be made to look weak!
On certain subjects, a man does not speak--
To keep a certain silence is polite.
I traveled the world and seen all in sight;
Then why does this young girl hold such mystique?
What about Nikki makes her so unique?
How did I find myself in such a plight?

Why does her scent linger in every room?
Why do I find myself lost in her eyes?
Why do I yearn to kiss her lips once more?
My heart skips at the smell of her perfume;
Her eyes are brighter than the bluest sky;
Her tender embrace is what I long for.

[gordy]

yet to pen this isin itself a way of speaking it, and i detect no weakness myself