You Couldn't be THAT Beautiful ;)

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Hiyu
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You Couldn't be THAT Beautiful ;)

Post by Hiyu » Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:58 am

IT'S BEEN A LOOOOONG TIME SINCE I LAST VISITED POETRYPAGES. I MISSED THIS SITE! Oh God thank You for letting me remember this wonderful site... this virtual place has read all the poems i've written in the name of love.

now, i present my comeback poem... ;) season of looove again? i don't know... hahaha. this is supposed to be light romance stuff so...

JUST ENJOY THE READ. :)

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You Couldn't be THAT Beautiful

Tell me, girl, you couldn't be THAT beautiful
...to knock the wind off me
...to haunt my dreams (well I LOVE IT!)
...to make me call you everytime I feel like it

Well I know you aren't mine
But it doesn't excuse you
From me in calling you
an angel... MINE? HAHA.

Pardon me, would you teach me the right words
To say or write to you
You couldn't be THAT beautiful
But it's all this mouth can utter
and stutterly say
b-b-b-e-au-t-if-ful.

Tell me girl
How've you become THAT beautiful
to make me think of you
every night, every day
every minute in every way'
I guess I love this feeling...

'coz you're soul is as pretty as your face
and it makes this heartbeat race
oh girl you couldn't be that beautiful
inside out... but heaven's it's true.

just remember to catch me when i fall...
'coz i'll catch you even before you fall.
[just like now... ;)]

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I ENJOYED THIS. HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS TOO! haha i think it's a wee bit nonsensical or illogical or whatchamacallit... but's it's the most raw (or rawest? i'm losing my grammar skills!) thing i've written for yeaaars! well comment guys. or just ENJOY. :)
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: You Couldn't be THAT Beautiful ;)

Post by wadley gurl » Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:51 am

:thumbsup: :thewave:
Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind
-Helena-
A Midsummer night's dream

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