Hot Ice

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Hot Ice

Post by Duchess » Sat Sep 27, 2008 8:20 pm

(Its been awhile since Ive written poetry :lol: but here is one of my recent ones. Thanks again Sarah for the help :cool: ~D)



You look at me like I’m the plague
Then look at me as though
I'm all that you can see
You push me away
Then hold me like you can't live without me



You say there isn't a spark
No fireworks
Between you and me
But baby, you and I both know
that’s a lie



You miss me when I’m gone
Then act as if I don’t exist
There is one thing that I know
There is something about you
I can't resist



Everyone can see
When you refuse to open your eyes
You would rather grow old and die alone
Than try



I don’t look like a super model
But honestly they annoy me
All pretty and perfect
No flaws to see



Well guess what, honey?
I’m not a f*cking super model
I’m a real person with hopes and dreams
Unlike them
I want your heart not your money



A high maintence woman will only hurt you
Of this you should already know
So just shut your mouth and hold me close
So our love can grow
"Our minds create our realities based on our perceptions and how we view our world..." "In crazy mans world, everyone else is insane and he is the only sane one"
Both said by My Georgia Muse

I miss my baby...R.I.P Chyna
~*}i{*Duchess*}i{*~

I wish to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.

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Re: Hot Ice

Post by Jess Schue » Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:17 am

Very fierce Duchess! foolish men, can't see what's right in front of um' :twisted: ...nicely done, glad to see your back in the saddle again~always...Slayer*
-Live simply, so others can simply live-Keller Williams

--Breathe, breathe in the air,
Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd

Dont wana be anything where i dont know when to stop-Trey Anastasio

<3Oh my lover for the first time in my life
my mind can feel...everything is clear in my heart
everything is clear in our world
i feel life, oh i feel love-John Lennon

Let there be songs, to fill the air-Hunter/Garcia

This Love has got No ceiling-Eddie Vedder

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Re: Hot Ice

Post by Duchess » Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:52 am

:oops: thank you
"Our minds create our realities based on our perceptions and how we view our world..." "In crazy mans world, everyone else is insane and he is the only sane one"
Both said by My Georgia Muse

I miss my baby...R.I.P Chyna
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I wish to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.

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Re: Hot Ice

Post by Mellen12 » Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:46 am

A high maintence woman will only hurt you
Of this you should already know
So just shut your mouth and hold me close
So our love can grow
Absolutely love this poem of yours!!!

Well done Duchess :thewave:
"A woman with the courage to step out into the unknown, risking temporary loneliness for a shot at lasting joy, is more than a "single." She's singular. Instead of defining herself by what she lacks - a relationship with a man - she defines herself by what she has: a relationship with God." ~from Dawn Eden's 'The Thrill of the Chaste'

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Re: Hot Ice

Post by Duchess » Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:40 pm

thank you :oops:
"Our minds create our realities based on our perceptions and how we view our world..." "In crazy mans world, everyone else is insane and he is the only sane one"
Both said by My Georgia Muse

I miss my baby...R.I.P Chyna
~*}i{*Duchess*}i{*~

I wish to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.

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Re: Hot Ice

Post by Tom Watson » Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:24 am

Well done, Duchess... :thumbsup:


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Re: Hot Ice

Post by psychotic pretender » Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:18 am

i likes this one alot

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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