Inspired
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Inspired
Inspired
As it happens O’Leary’s dear mother disowned him
when he started a fling with that wild, Gypsy girl,
who cavorted all night by the light of a campfire
for assorted male patrons, and entrepreneurs
But regardless of his own chagrin he still loved her
There was something about her he couldn’t deny
She appealed to his sense of beguiled abandon
when she danced by the flames underneath darkened sky
In a trance he would watch her with great admiration,
as she twirled , and sashayed between shadows, and stars,
and the men in attendance drank wine as the moon rose
while they listened to music from Gypsy guitars.
Then at length when the first light of morning had broken,
and O’Leary awakened with renewed desire
Far away he could see that the Gypsies had traveled
All alone would he feel that his love was inspired.
As it happens O’Leary’s dear mother disowned him
when he started a fling with that wild, Gypsy girl,
who cavorted all night by the light of a campfire
for assorted male patrons, and entrepreneurs
But regardless of his own chagrin he still loved her
There was something about her he couldn’t deny
She appealed to his sense of beguiled abandon
when she danced by the flames underneath darkened sky
In a trance he would watch her with great admiration,
as she twirled , and sashayed between shadows, and stars,
and the men in attendance drank wine as the moon rose
while they listened to music from Gypsy guitars.
Then at length when the first light of morning had broken,
and O’Leary awakened with renewed desire
Far away he could see that the Gypsies had traveled
All alone would he feel that his love was inspired.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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March 2011
- moonflower
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Re: Inspired
i could see her dancing in the moonlight, dark hair flying, as she mesmerized those watching..a great write bags!!
Re: Inspired
Thanks Val. I'm glad you liked it.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
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Re: Inspired
I love the pictures you painted with words, making it easy to see the gypsies dancing in the moonlight. Great write.
Bobbi
Bobbi
Re: Inspired
Thanks fatsatsu. Is that a Japenese name?
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
- fstasu53
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Re: Inspired
No it's a Dwight Yoakam song, my name is Bobbi.
Re: Inspired
Oh,...I love Dwight Yoakum.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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March 2011
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Re: Inspired
wonderful write Bags. I loved it.
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Re: Inspired
Love it Bags.... wonderfully passionate imagery. Earthy and bold .... you make me want to dance and love like a gypsy. Poor O'Leary though .... the boy should have known better
.j.
.j.
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
flickr -jeannerene photostream
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