Just Like Them (friends or more)

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Hiyu
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Just Like Them (friends or more)

Post by Hiyu » Sat Aug 30, 2008 8:11 am

When I held her hand, it seemed so
True.
Genuine.
Real.

I painted that smile on her face.
No doubts.
No fears.
None.

But how does this feel?

That same hand being held by them.
That same smile being painted by them.

Jealousy?
Envy?
I'd rather hopeful fallacies.

I'll be forever like that -
Holding that same hand,
Painting that same smile,

Like your friends.
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: Just Like Them (friends or more)

Post by heinzs » Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:00 pm

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Re: Just Like Them (friends or more)

Post by Tom Watson » Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:10 am

Yes, sharing can be difficult at times...especially when the shared is precious to us.
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Re: Just Like Them (friends or more)

Post by Hiyu » Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:25 am

thanks for the replies! actually this is one of my older poems now.

hehehe thanks again. :) comments are really REALLY appreciated.

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Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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