The Eternal Trip

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The Eternal Trip

Post by Hiyu » Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:33 am

Picture perfect scenes playing through my mind
You and I together in the longest bus ride
That I hope will never end
And I wish will never end.

You and I alone in this world
We live in the real, but we're in ideal
And I know we wouldn't care
And I hope we shouldn't care.

We're breaths away, eye to eye
Side by side, hands to hands
Entangled adjacent arms
That are never meant to let go.

Through you I loved the silence
The inactivity, the moment of peace in reality
The nonsensical imageries within the fallacies

And I hope they will hear my plea
Of only you and me
In this trip everlasting...

Now you're smiling again.
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: The Eternal Trip

Post by unstructured » Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:30 am

:thumbsup:
Loved it!
Had I the heaven's embroidered cloths,
Enwrought wth golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

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Re: The Eternal Trip

Post by Hiyu » Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:38 am

tnx for the reply! :)
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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Re: The Eternal Trip

Post by fstasu53 » Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:55 pm

Beautiful expression of love. Enjoyed this a lot.

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Re: The Eternal Trip

Post by Hiyu » Wed Sep 03, 2008 4:58 am

thanks for the reply! :)
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.

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