Lazy Afternoon

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Lazy Afternoon

Post by beautifullyburnt » Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:28 am

As the leaves rustle,
high above, offering
a protection from the
blazing sun, the wind
is naught but a soft
breeze, turning the
pages of time.

The blanket is soft,
warmed by the rays,
tenderly it carresses
the ground below.
Birds fly in the hidden
sky, their song a distant
murmur.

Hours pass with no
movement, not wanting
to ruin the memory.
Hoping the time
will never come
when we must part.

The tears burn behind
smiling eyes, knowing
time will change tomorrow,
will make things long
dreaded come to pass.
Though for a while this
blissful day was real.

But it was just a picnic
in the park.
My life is a poster pasted on a wall of forgotten dreams

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Re: Lazy Afternoon

Post by heinzs » Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:32 am

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Re: Lazy Afternoon

Post by Jess Schue » Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:25 am

This is stunning...that's the first word that came to mind after reading... It's a lazy Fall afternoon in Chicago right now and sitting in class staring out the window made the imagery in the poem very relatable for me~always...Slayer*
-Live simply, so others can simply live-Keller Williams

--Breathe, breathe in the air,
Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd

Dont wana be anything where i dont know when to stop-Trey Anastasio

<3Oh my lover for the first time in my life
my mind can feel...everything is clear in my heart
everything is clear in our world
i feel life, oh i feel love-John Lennon

Let there be songs, to fill the air-Hunter/Garcia

This Love has got No ceiling-Eddie Vedder

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Re: Lazy Afternoon

Post by beautifullyburnt » Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:43 pm

Thanks for the bump Heinzs! It's appreciated.

Slayer, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.

BB
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Re: Lazy Afternoon

Post by Duchess » Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:39 am

:bow: i back what Slayer said...very well written!

:book: :thumbsup: :hello:

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Re: Lazy Afternoon

Post by fstasu53 » Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:59 am

Beautiful images are found in your wonderful words.

Bobbi

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